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After reading Deborah Tannen’s essay, There is No Unmarked Woman, I disagree with her statements concluding that there is no “marked” man in a world that is often seen as male based linguistically and male dominant.
Your thesis is a little confusing. First I would suggest that you rework the beginning of the thesis - instead of the "after reading" part, just start off saying "I disagree with Tannen's statements in her essay concluding...". I also think you can make your meaning a little clearer - how does the male dominated world lead to a marked man?
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